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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-02-23 14:36:53 | bus trip_(1) | A little to unrealistic for my tastes, and it's marked true story and there's no way that's true, you can tell just by looking at the dialogue. Plus, no guy wouldn't enjoy sex and they would have been moaning to where people on the bus would have known, especially the people in the next seat...for shame...2/10 |
| 2005-02-24 18:36:53 | bus trip_(1) | i rate this a 10/10 dude make a part 2!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2005-02-24 20:42:07 | bus trip_(1) | That was a good story but the mom part isn't working for me make it a neighbor a teacher or at least another mom or a freind but good story |
| 2005-02-24 20:49:28 | bus trip_(1) | pretty good |
| 2005-02-24 20:54:09 | bus trip_(1) | Hey, if someone wants to enoiugh they can silence themselves, no problem. Mind over matter, that's my theory. Anyway, this is a pretty good story. Yeah, paragraphs make nice reading, and you did get into emotions and into thier minds. The mother is something of a dynamic character, she changes through the story. See? English class DOES come in handy! 7/10! |