| 2004-06-27 16:29:40 |
Cure for a Headache
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Auron is a fucking moron, i mean, it was an ok story, but there was very little detail. It was erotic to me, but the spelling took away from the storyline, plus there are entire sex scenes where all the author describes is the damn position...lame. Trey is even worse then auron, he spelled appealed wrong lol, which really gives you a key as to how smart he actually is when he uses words like "extravagant" hes a know-it-all who knows very little...fuck you went too far though, it wasnt a terrible story, but the comments were mis-leading. The only person i agree with whole-heartedly is bhoy. it wasnt completely terrible but it was pure fantasy, to unrealistic. overall...5/10 |