| 2004-12-11 21:39:30 |
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wish that happened to me |
| 2005-02-01 02:49:16 |
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judging by the comments i dont think ill even bother to read doesnt sound like my kind of story but for taking the time to write it.......1/10 ;) |
| 2005-07-11 10:44:58 |
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This was very hot stuff. Please continue to write.. |
| 2006-06-29 10:19:25 |
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oh god, i wish that had been me |
| 2007-01-30 02:23:10 |
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I'm a New Yorker and this story is complete bullshite, there is no way in hell that the bowery station is as packed as you described it, and if you were "fucked" while packed as a sardine there was no way in hell you would have had the space for someone to touch you. And I guarantee someone would have seen you if the train was so full since all NYC trains are very well light. If you wanted to write a story about a sexual encounter taking place in a city you are not familiar with do what all great writers do is called RESEARCH YOU NUBNUTS. |