| 2004-04-25 15:54:53 |
Sucking And Assfucking At The Video Store
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Mmmm...I wish I was her right about now. |
| 2004-11-04 09:58:10 |
THE BOYS FROM BELTEGUESE
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Damn that's an interesting story.. should be a book not an erotic story!!! |
| 2004-04-11 13:47:47 |
DRAGON SWEAT
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This story is a bucket of shit |
| 2005-01-10 12:10:14 |
DRAGON SWEAT
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it's not shit it's pretty good, but it's not an erotic story really just fantasy. Which being labled as such shouldn't be enough to consider it shit. 9/10 |
| 2004-02-17 14:29:34 |
THE GUNPOWDER GALS
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Good story, except for the ending. Perhaps the author realized it was getting long and ended it but should have made it long enough to tell whether the ladies saved the town and who it was that wrote the beginning of the story. Was James Lee her father? Too many unanswered questions. Overall I liked it, would make a good movie. |