| 2004-02-24 04:58:19 |
THE GUNPOWDER GALS
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Very nice story, Perhaps to be continued in further chapters? |
| 2004-04-22 11:23:49 |
RIDING THE JAVELIN
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good but needed more first perzon |
| 2007-01-23 19:23:23 |
RIDING THE JAVELIN
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Fucken wonderful! 10/10! Just wish the ending was more detailed. |
| 2007-12-05 13:18:30 |
LAID ALOFT
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Pity they didnt spank and cane her as well, perhaps they can do that in the next part at the finishing party. I like to think all ''Boss Ladies'' need a good spanking. when will you write this in to your story. |
| 2005-02-23 14:14:12 |
TRUST US, WE'RE SALESMEN
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wow dude! great writing. you know what your doing. one of my recent best that ive read. kinda dark though in a way if ya know what i mean. ive got to read more of your shit. great job 9/10. |