| 2005-06-28 06:08:55 |
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Pretty corny. The poor English and spelling ruins it! |
| 2005-06-29 13:22:10 |
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it was good just bad grammer |
| 2005-07-01 21:01:17 |
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Good Story, like everyone said, poor Grammer. |
| 2005-09-11 18:02:08 |
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liked it not the best keep writeing |
| 2005-10-08 01:22:32 |
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good plot, but how the hell did they know where u lived and who u were? Plus ur grammer sucks along with ur details. Added to the fact of ur grammer and poor amount of details, but good plot I would have to give u a 6/10. I hope ur other parts have more details about the actual teasing and fucking. PS: when are the next parts coming out? |