| 2004-07-08 15:29:46 |
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That was crap. Try using english. And by the way, did you graduate? |
| 2004-07-08 17:02:54 |
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Finish the story cuz it sux without the ending |
| 2004-07-11 01:06:42 |
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IT ENDED TO CRAPPY YOU SHOULAD HAVE FINISHED THE WHOLE STORY NOTWAIT FOR THE NEXT 12 PARTS!! fUCK!! |
| 2004-07-11 21:50:50 |
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Please don't inflict your writing on the rest of us. The real story is: you woke in the night and found yourself licking your dog's ass. Embarassed, you concocted this hairball yarn and tried to sell it to your school buddies, but as you said, they would have none of it. Her pussy lips messaged your face ? Did her pussy lips operate a telephone, or did they send you an email by typing on a computer or perhaps they operated a fax machine ? What did your face reply ? The girl tasted like a raw piece of chicken. That's just nasty man. Did Mr. Isimu's name change documents arrive that morning ? He suddenly became Mr. Imasu. How about writing a S&M story of how your English teacher beat the crap out of you for such atrocious spelling, grammar and style. |
| 2004-07-12 02:49:16 |
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Grammer, punctuation, sentence structure, paragraph breaks--hey give us a break and burn the rest of it, then learn how the English language works before you foust crap like this on anyone again. I give it a ZERO out of ten |