| 2005-01-12 22:25:59 |
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This story sucks harder than my gf.Dont bother with the rest.U FUCKING SUCK!!! |
| 2005-02-02 22:59:11 |
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this was a good story |
| 2005-03-29 06:20:43 |
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very poor indeed |
| 2005-05-24 09:31:21 |
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What a load of shit. Your story sucked. The spelling and punctuation were terrible. If you can't write or express yourself any better than this, you don't deserve to ever get laid. Don't bother with the future chapters of this terrible story |
| 2005-06-15 10:46:48 |
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The grammar sucked as well as expressing yourself. It's still a good storyline so far. Post the rest so we can see if the bad parts are permanent. |