| 2004-07-11 00:17:36 |
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This story would have 100% realism if you just replaced the girl with the French doll you and your fag assed, puny-dicked buddy saved two years to buy. Now if you were a smarter investor you would have purchased a dictionary. |
| 2004-07-12 11:13:53 |
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I dont know what your talking about Jack, i thought it was an altogether good story for a beginning porn writer, i bet u couldnt do any better, sure there were a few typos but i thought it was pretty good |
| 2004-07-27 11:08:22 |
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Just plain stupid. It might help if you actually gave some thought to the story. Don't quit your day job. |
| 2004-07-30 00:10:33 |
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This story was terrible. Whilst the grammar was not the biggest problem I did see some errors, and I will admit that I make my fair share, however, I must say that the overall idea of this story was dreadful and I cannot imagine how you could think anyone would like this. Stop writing or at least lose your virginity, damn. |
| 2004-07-31 18:52:39 |
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Jack off Sprat strikes again !! Sure the story sucked and wasn't true(come on site folks your supposed to be reading them first) Now Sprat what is up your ass ?? Time to get a life and stop playing critic your comments are pure bull shit |