| 2005-01-10 22:11:26 |
12 is too young
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couldn't finish it. to bad to read. you get an F+ |
| 2005-01-20 19:59:22 |
12 is too young
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dude grammer and spelling are your frends so lern how to use them |
| 2005-01-25 08:20:16 |
12 is too young
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people are right about this story. For a start it stinks because of bad grammar and spelling mistakes (and lots of it) go back to writing courses. 3/10 bad. looks like you offically hit rock bottom. and i hope you die or get cancer. |
| 2005-01-28 10:54:36 |
12 is too young
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Let me see, you must be writing from the viewpoint (and writing ability) of a 12 year-old. Why embarrass yourself? |
| 2005-01-31 20:12:07 |
12 is too young
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I've read some bad stories, but damn, this one takes the cake. I've written better stuff than this. That's pathetic. |