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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-07-30 20:34:52 | 12 is too young | I didn't even get an errection reading that, its still floppy, must be the incrediable bad grammer, its worse than mine. And it has an amazing lack of description... This isn't even a story this is travasy. |
| 2005-08-01 08:28:19 | 12 is too young | heres a quick tip the word is TITTIES there are no Ds and you finish IES because your writing in plural. |
| 2005-09-04 11:07:17 | 12 is too young | huk3d un foneekz dun gud fur mii!!! STOP!...........GRAMMAR TIME! |
| 2005-09-10 08:48:30 | 12 is too young | That was crap. Crap story, crapper grammer, and totally shit spelling |
| 2005-09-16 01:10:16 | 12 is too young | I would say it was actually a good first time try but you shoul check your spelling a little closer. Had a good story bot you lost it on the spelling. Better luck next time. |