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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-07-11 00:37:10 | Jason chap. 3 & 4 | Um it was sorta confusing with all the different names. I dont think the writer kept them all straight. The whole relationship between the main character and Tina I guess was a little skewed. It will be a better storie if u clean up the character's relationships with the girls and if you keep them all correctly named. |
| 2004-07-11 02:11:02 | Jason chap. 3 & 4 | yea zak is right he was mentioning becky b4 we knew who she was and i like the way u got the step-dad arested stupid fuck i hope he gets but raped i hate rapest but over all this story kicked ass besides the names part and all good job can wait for 5 and 6 |
| 2004-07-11 20:14:54 | Jason chap. 3 & 4 | Zak there are only three females so far in the story. His Mother, his sister Tina and the neighbor girl Becky. If that confuses you don't read all the other chapters because there are many more females to come in future chapters. |
| 2004-07-12 10:27:30 | Jason chap. 3 & 4 | u keep missing up tina with becky |
| 2004-07-13 09:26:19 | Jason chap. 3 & 4 | After Mom came in Becky's face she got up and went over to her purse and pulled out this dildo. I thought Becky was going to go nuts. Mom started to react just like Becky.Parts like this is what everyone is talking about shaggy.other than that good story.7/10 |