| 2004-07-09 05:27:48 |
New Girl_(2)
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I must say I didn't like it too much, the grammar threw me off a lot. I normally don't care about spelling and grammar but when it makes it hard to read like this I must make mention. However, the general storyline, once you surpass the errors, was quite good, the only problem there was they got to it way too fast and there was very little detail in between their changing of positions. Overall I give it about a 6/10. |
| 2004-07-09 12:24:02 |
New Girl_(2)
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I like the story, but I wanna know if she get pregnant or not. |
| 2004-07-10 06:22:03 |
New Girl_(2)
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skateboarders are whiny lil bitches.they deserve and usually get no pussy.also anal ?uh uh not during there first time together unprepared and un protested .dude go have some sex then you will know how to write about it |
| 2004-07-13 11:55:23 |
New Girl_(2)
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This is to that wanker who said skateboarders suck,u can go fuck yourself,im 14 and iv had a blowjob from my gf.......To the auther:brilliant story dude |
| 2004-07-14 19:44:41 |
New Girl_(2)
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Lol a whole story and of all the points to be made sexmunkey wants to know if the gurl got pregnant well it was alrite but kinda unlikely to ever happen like many said anal first time yeah rite |