| 2004-07-16 02:48:13 |
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dude, i garuntee u have never been laid, or gotten head, or anything. it is obvious by your story telling. if your writtings are to be anything like your true life experiences, then u are a fucking liar, go die |
| 2004-07-18 02:00:49 |
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Numerious idiotic spelling errors. This story wasn't edited before posting. Poor paragraph structure. Written by a relatively inexperienced novice. Overall it was less than good. |
| 2004-07-20 04:14:41 |
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The grammar sucked. But I think the other guys on here are right, have sex first THEN write the story. |
| 2004-07-23 23:37:45 |
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Dude leave him alone. stop being so fucking rude. i liked it and it was good. |
| 2004-07-24 15:43:21 |
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GR8 story Fuck any1 |