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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-06-16 23:46:13 | First Impressions_(2) | that right i dont care who ya r |
| 2005-06-16 23:46:13 | First Impressions_(3) | that right i dont care who ya r |
| 2005-06-16 23:46:13 | First Impressions_(4) | that right i dont care who ya r |
| 2004-07-08 05:02:30 | My first day of school | You fucking suck boston what the fuck was that bull shit. Holly mother of jeesus please do not write any more stories you dumb ass. sorry no one was dissing me so i had to do it |
| 2004-07-08 08:01:58 | My first day of school | A little unrealistic.. No-one in the class spotted them? A decent attempt (worth a 5/6) but it was hard to read in places. Remember to paragraph your stories, spell check them and start dialog on separate lines (because it makes it a lot easier to read and understand who is saying what). A try to vary words (such as tummy which you used regularly instead of 'stomach' or 'gut' or 'belly'), but as I said.. A good attempt. Let's see what they get up to after school.. ;) |