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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-12-02 17:36:02 | My first day of school | all you guys are about proper perfect english i thought that story was ace i remember getting a blow job at the back of my maths class.... great story |
| 2004-12-18 23:19:49 | My first day of school | that story kicked ass i remember when i got head in the back of my science class oooh yeah ;) keep um cuming |
| 2005-01-11 08:02:33 | My first day of school | it sucks |
| 2005-02-24 20:37:26 | My first day of school | you suck. this story sucked. it was fake. and so are you. |
| 2005-03-11 12:54:43 | My first day of school | If you proof read it more, I'm sure you'd have noticed some of the mistakes. That's alright, though. Pretty good story, in general. It a quick-to-the-point plot, which is good and bad at the same time. If I'd say anything, it'd be to check it and go through it once more.. try to add more description and more instances. Build suspence. ;) Other than that, it's great. |