| 2004-07-14 22:23:45 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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5/10 great story just learn how to spell and your ratings will go up. Nobody likes to read porn and try to figure out what the writer is trying to say or spell. Go back to grammer school. |
| 2004-07-15 01:21:49 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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mucky da trai sucko jasitio ma tola? |
| 2004-07-15 02:41:17 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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Wow..i stopped reading when i noticed you spelled BRA wrong..wow..go back to 5th grade loser..stop making up stories and claiming that they happened to your friend |
| 2004-07-15 07:31:57 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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The story wasn't so bad...shame about the grammar and the fact that the girl didn't even seem into it at all. If someone who knew how to write did this story it would have been better, but it was ok. |
| 2004-07-16 14:53:08 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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Not very believable. What mother would allow a 17 year-old to "Babysit" a 15 year-old? That aside, the poor construction and spelling really ruined things. You must have cut some classes when they were teaching you English. |