| 2004-07-25 22:34:35 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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Great story Boston write more, and its WHICH not WITCH. |
| 2004-07-28 00:27:31 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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titman you f@g you don't know what we like speak for yourself this was a sweet story, and im with you all the way "..." |
| 2004-09-19 13:26:46 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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Cool story, nice buld up. |
| 2004-09-22 17:20:43 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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This story was at most pretty pitiful, the story line was chopy. The grammer was awful, the spelling as well. I would reccomend you take a literature class before you try and write another story, if you make a part two I will look at it, if you do better I will follow that up with a nicer comment, till then try more, and mabey you will get somewhere. BTW to Titman Al thats your opinion I infact would hate to see a story like that, you a sick retarted little boy. |
| 2004-09-24 00:11:30 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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i loved it please make more |