| 2005-09-06 11:18:57 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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all mother fucker fuck you asshole.. |
| 2005-09-09 23:14:48 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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What about the pizzas |
| 2005-10-15 11:56:35 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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It was okay I guess. Spelling distracted me a little bit, but that's just one step in writing. Some things you went into too much detail and others not enough. I didn't get completely hard from this one, but it was alright |
| 2005-11-06 03:24:51 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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why the fuck would she knock on her own fucking DOOR. KILLED THE FUCKING STOREY. DUA. |
| 2005-11-19 02:22:35 |
My night with the baby sitter.
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Not too bad of a story. Other than the spelling, it was written well. The whole knock on your own door and have to ask to come in thing was pretty much dumb. But hey, we all make mistakes. 9/10 |