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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-08-02 00:06:44 | My Party_(0) | "There all real"??? And, your (excuse me) you're a self proclaimed "writer". Shadow, honey, don't call yourself a writer until you learn some punctuation, proper word usage and the difference between the word "there" and the contraction "they're" |
| 2004-08-02 12:47:03 | My Party_(0) | Most others make their stories longer, a bit more titillating... this one wasn't either of those. |
| 2004-08-07 21:13:26 | My Party_(0) | Thanks for the story - it made things happen for me. p.s. A writer is someone who writes. There are "good' and "bad" but while your spelling is not quite perfect, I applaud your desire to write. |
| 2004-08-11 02:20:14 | My Party_(0) | When I write and yes I know the definition of one. One who sells books dear. When I write I get into it. I dont stop and edit myself just go for the bang of it. If your looking for writing errors then maybe you are not feeling so sexual. Maybe you should read me and feel my buzz, a real buzz. |
| 2004-08-11 15:18:56 | My Party_(0) | "I wrote another. can't wait until you read it and feel my buzzzzz. it sex's me up real nicely when i know others are reading my life. thanks luv shadow lynn parker" Yeah, right. that isn't your life. It's a FANTASY. Also, please learn how to use "they're." ANNOYING!!! |