| 2004-07-13 23:51:33 |
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Repetition of the word you gives me such a massive ass cramp that I'll have to stand up and stretch now. Would anyone dare to count exactly how many yous there are ? You need to improve your writing style or you will start to piss off your audience, you know. |
| 2004-07-16 08:11:55 |
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Jack Sprat hit the SPOT. it would or could have been good if your had better wtiting skills. Sorry, but, I give this a two rating, because you can not tell a story worth a SHIT.. |
| 2004-08-03 20:22:09 |
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That was Awful |
| 2004-08-15 13:27:28 |
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i liked it. Need some more attention to the tourture parts....Whipping, spanking and such.....Need a slave??? |
| 2004-08-19 23:22:11 |
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Cut off his balls after making a pin cushon out of them. |