| 2007-07-27 00:20:52 |
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The story was too short but it was not bad I would say. |
| 2007-12-25 09:21:54 |
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take more time on the sex |
| 2004-07-18 10:44:48 |
Evening With Mother
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my problem with any story is that when the cock is brought into the story it should be described as huge and that's not describing it big enough.How can i get it into you writer's heads ' no pun intended.that the cock be decribed huge.Make your reader visualize.I should be an lnstructor on writing sex stories my comments are sometimes better than some stories |
| 2004-07-18 17:54:47 |
Evening With Mother
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I think you have a small cock and that´s the only reason why you tell the authors they have to write that it is huge. grow up, guy, you´re kust annoying. |
| 2004-07-18 19:38:09 |
Evening With Mother
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wow how gay are you? i neva really pay attention to the "cock" and i could care less about its discription. most guys lie about it anyway. anywayz the story was ok... needs to be longer with more details... uuhhh ohhh it was lovely LOL sounds like she faked it to me |