| 2004-11-13 13:09:01 |
Cindy_(3)
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The story had some flashes of brilliance (penile stimulation that is). Pity English is your second language. |
| 2004-11-14 01:48:37 |
Cindy_(3)
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If I were to bitch about it being too long I would get egged right? Well it's too fucking long and I don't care what any of you think. Anyways, The story was really good. It took me a while to read. There were a couple of spelling mistakes which made the story stupider and english people sicken me. Well, back to my job. I'm being really nice and giving this story a 5/10 |
| 2004-11-15 03:48:31 |
Cindy_(3)
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Xellent story, well written. Thank you. |
| 2004-11-15 04:17:36 |
Cindy_(3)
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fantastic sexy story. I met a girl aged 30 some 20yrs my junior and she droppede her pants and gave me a good sucking i shot lots of cream up her and examined her pussy in some depth and empasise with your story. |
| 2004-11-16 23:46:24 |
Cindy_(3)
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enjoyed the story the graphics were really good |