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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2004-11-28 04:43:21 | Cindy_(3) | GRATE STORY. I HAVE A HARDON THAT IS FULL OF JUICE AND I THINK IT IS READY TO SHOOT------yAH --COME----C0ME----COME |
2004-11-28 15:52:30 | Cindy_(3) | Took me 6 minutes to come!!! |
2004-11-28 20:04:37 | Cindy_(3) | The spelling mistakes ruin what might have been a good story. The story telling is very stilted. If you mean "you're" then use it. If you mean "his" then why use "he's"? And some of your reviwers who condone you bad spelling only make things worse. |
2004-11-29 08:45:12 | Cindy_(3) | This went a bit further than my fantasy. I wish Cindy was my daughter! Story was fantastic, Keep it up PLEASE! |
2004-11-30 02:16:46 | Cindy_(3) | I think I'm saddened by your apparent lack of writing skills and surprised at the positive responses (Grate story!!!!!) to them. Are you really this bad or do you deliberately debase yourself in an effort to appeal to a largely illiterate readership? If the later, then I misspoke myself - only a writer with great skill could convice me that they were a liiterary midget so thoroughly. |