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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-07-27 21:59:30 | Josh & Kylie go Paintballing | i read the whole thing, and i don't see where it was boring. i can understand this comment maybe if someone were looking for something with constant action, but the between parts were well written, and i really hope you don't kill yourself. i have also posted a story on here, (and was lucky enough to get only one comment so far, and it was good) but i can safely say that while you're writing something, it is hard to tell exactly what people are going to like, and the only thing to do is just go with it. Steve, i hope to see more from you, as i have enjoyed reading your work, and also i want to let you know that i think it is really cool that you got on here and stood up for yourself against these wolves, just remember, there are some people that liked it, keep it cummin'. :) |
| 2004-07-27 23:56:57 | Josh & Kylie go Paintballing | Very well done. I enjoyed this a lot more than other stories like it. You had excellent grammar, spelling and punctuation, minus the rare error; it flowed nicely, it wasn't overly long or complicated. A wonderful piece of work, I've read another story of yours. You show promise. Good luck. |
| 2004-07-28 00:20:32 | Josh & Kylie go Paintballing | THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I'VE READ IN ALONG TIME UNFOURNTUALLY I HAVN'T READ ANY OF UR OTHER STORIES BUT I PLAN OF DOING SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK BRO |
| 2004-07-28 13:34:33 | Josh & Kylie go Paintballing | Hey, i liked it but you really didn't need to put the thing where the brother fingers his own arse...ew. but keep it up the rest i liked. |
| 2004-07-29 18:08:46 | Josh & Kylie go Paintballing | asdjljsldkjajdkldfsl;aj;lsj... fuoia bgoahg8oyase89tg634qt47lnkb... dapr8m ut8er90u tjiasou -0ret0mera htogifd gda0gaudru pgua ... |