| 2005-03-10 02:26:35 |
A Sinful Obsession
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Not bad.7/10.good luck with the next one. |
| 2005-03-10 02:26:35 |
A Sinful Obsession
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Not bad.7/10.good luck with the next one. |
| 2005-03-11 12:47:48 |
A Sinful Obsession
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this is so fucking hott and all it lacks is some voyuerism ''how about in next part adding an Auntie coming over and walking in on them while mom and son are masturbating and Auntie stands at the door watching and masturbating |
| 2005-03-11 15:10:07 |
A Sinful Obsession
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hurry pt.2 don't be an ass-hole like alot of other writers' hurry and post a pt.2 and remember incest 'voyuerism an unbeatable pair |
| 2005-03-15 17:59:50 |
A Sinful Obsession
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8/10. Very believeable but lacked spontinaety...the best sex happens by accident & is unplanned. Titman AL, u need to write your own story cos your suggestions would take the stories we read in a direction the writer never intended to. |