| 2005-06-04 18:34:20 |
Learning the lifestyle - a sideline story
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To much teaching not enough fucking |
| 2005-06-07 08:32:35 |
Learning the lifestyle - a sideline story
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boring |
| 2005-06-07 15:43:40 |
Learning the lifestyle - a sideline story
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the sex need to be on the first date. that wouuld have been fuckin awesome |
| 2005-06-07 18:20:16 |
Learning the lifestyle - a sideline story
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It was ok up until the end. You need to add more details into your story. You really skipped out on all the actual sex pieces that were in it. But your writing was good and they way you put things was good. Just more detail. |
| 2005-06-09 18:34:08 |
Learning the lifestyle - a sideline story
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hot and more sex other than that it was excellent |