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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-07-24 10:31:04 | They cum back | First off, Jack, what the hell???? Okay, the story was nice, but it needs to have a little bit more emotion on her part. Develop the STORY, not just the fucking. Well, thats all I got right now. |
| 2004-08-11 00:35:52 | They cum back | "Debbie was into a nymphomania heaven." ??? What crap! You have a tendency to lapse into some really stilted phraseology in the middle of all those creaming cocks and that pounded juice filled pussy. Stay with the flow of the fucking. And, work a little on plot and character motivation--just a little. |
| 2004-10-20 22:26:50 | They cum back | Yo this story was pretty cool |
| 2005-02-05 15:09:22 | Steel not steal, semen not seamen,raping not rapping. learn to spell, dummy; b'cuz it distracts from this crummy rape story. i gv u a 5. | |
| 2005-02-18 06:03:50 | This is brilliant writing. Very measured, well paced and well described. Pay no attention to those who jibe at typos, they probably have no creative genius in them, which I think you do. Please keep on writing. |