| 2005-10-16 03:44:11 |
Cheerleader Virgin Fucks
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Damn netspeak. When your writing a story, do NOT replace words such as "You" with a LETTER. Instead of saying "You." you used the letter "u." That is probably the worst thing about this story. Work on grammar and spelling. 8/10 |
| 2005-11-16 09:34:23 |
Cheerleader Virgin Fucks
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Yo coach is a molestor, and a dog would not come on to you that easy. Very weak. |
| 2005-11-20 05:42:21 |
Cheerleader Virgin Fucks
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loved it! Write more about the dog. |
| 2005-11-23 15:55:25 |
Cheerleader Virgin Fucks
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Ihighly recomend you work on your spelling and grammer. Also you should think about how people say things more. 4/10 |
| 2005-11-28 19:15:03 |
Cheerleader Virgin Fucks
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good story i look forward to the next one. if u wanna instant message me my screen name is greywolfx93 |