| 2004-12-26 09:38:57 |
Cheerleader Virgin Fucks
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You have a great story but you wrote it pretty poorly. slow down next time! |
| 2004-12-27 05:13:17 |
Cheerleader Virgin Fucks
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Please don't ever write again. |
| 2005-01-02 00:29:36 |
Cheerleader Virgin Fucks
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Idid like the plot but you moved 2 quickly |
| 2005-01-16 07:06:36 |
Cheerleader Virgin Fucks
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wat r u thinkin bt..get part 2 |
| 2005-01-30 19:11:13 |
Cheerleader Virgin Fucks
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why do people have to critasize if you think you can do better write one yourself. it was a really gd story well done 10/10 |