| 2005-04-03 03:53:59 |
Me and My best friend_(0)
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Grammer errors ???????? Dumb and dumber. Story has promise, but spelling is awful. |
| 2005-04-03 05:56:13 |
Me and My best friend_(0)
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Love, something tells me you're 12, yourself. The least you could do is go back, edit it, help those gramatical and punctuation errors. |
| 2005-04-03 09:08:12 |
Me and My best friend_(0)
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you make me horny |
| 2005-04-03 21:06:56 |
Me and My best friend_(0)
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i dont know u stopped half way through that kind of sucked.... also re read and sort out those spelling mistakes |
| 2005-04-04 20:09:47 |
Me and My best friend_(0)
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The spelling and grammar was wicked bad, and I thought the story its self was mediocre at best. |