| 2005-04-04 21:52:46 |
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hey baby |
| 2005-04-05 13:06:05 |
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I liked it this far, but I think ORAL SEX and doing both of her brothers and yours would be HOT! |
| 2005-05-21 17:49:57 |
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This is a horribly written story. You need to correct the grammatical errors and the punctuation mistakes. |
| 2005-06-10 03:42:42 |
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Amby, you have a lovely story to tell so tell it. Don't be intimidated by constructive criticism, they mean well and they are giving you good advise. I take my hat off to you for your courage, you will go far and if this is your field, you are off to a wonderful start. Treat us to your precious story, please go on. |
| 2005-06-11 11:53:53 |
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Please learn to spell and use grammar properly and it would make for some good reading. |