| 2004-08-07 00:39:27 |
In the heat of The blaze
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Ok not real great story you wrote it like you were in a real hurry. I hate to say anything about spelling but you couldn't understand half of what you wrote. Next time try this, write the story as an email and do spell check then cut it and come here and paste it and you have your spelling taken care of |
| 2004-08-10 18:53:54 |
In the heat of The blaze
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sucks |
| 2004-08-13 00:00:13 |
In the heat of The blaze
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Well that contained about 4 sentences. Learn how to use grammer and capitals and stuff YOU FUCKING MORON!!!!!!! |
| 2004-08-13 22:19:52 |
In the heat of The blaze
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i cant even read that shit... |
| 2004-08-14 03:33:37 |
In the heat of The blaze
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Next time write your stories in english please. |