| 2004-08-17 11:07:28 |
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why bother to say wait for part 2? no-one wants it. |
| 2004-08-18 06:41:07 |
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By far the best grammar i have ever read. You must be one fucked up 18 year old. Nuff Said. |
| 2004-08-22 02:19:09 |
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i've heard of a lame duck but this was a dead duck !!!! really piss poor story. .. One other thing Fiction- means made up , not real. True -- means it really happened nit a dream or your imagination. I say this so hopefully next time you will post your story in Fiction where it belongs or the garbage take your pick |
| 2004-08-25 03:53:59 |
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my clit is so dissatisfied |
| 2004-09-16 00:51:18 |
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fuck what a damn story.i don't think the author is a 18 year old |