| 2004-11-10 19:29:48 |
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You're getting better and your action is erection city. One thing, when you start a subject in a para-graph, stick to it. I noticed that you changed the subject twice in 2 separate paras. Otherwise i really enjoyed your story and I gave it a 10. Waiting for more. |
| 2004-11-10 19:54:30 |
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Keith, Is this link good or is it going to the hacker? I got a new address from someone who said it was you with a code word included. But I don't know if that was the hacker or you. I'll assume the link here is good and send you a password from me. Love and kisses, Cathy |
| 2004-11-11 21:29:13 |
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Man these stories are great. a stroke of genious. |
| 2004-11-17 05:28:44 |
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This has been the best series at this site |
| 2004-11-29 17:30:24 |
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the best ever |