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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-11-11 15:38:30 | Phoenix Pt 4 Ch 01 | hmmm. I wondered when the tricks Jake taught Bela would coe in useful!! Keep it up Dank, this is nothin short of amazing. I would rate these stories in the top 5 best things i have ever read (an i hae read a LOT of stuf) |
| 2004-11-17 08:10:39 | Phoenix Pt 4 Ch 01 | At the start of the story you asked: "When you played Cowboys and Indians when you were a kid, did you ever pretend that you could be stabbed or shot lots of times and not be hurt?" The answer is yes yes yes - IF you were the indian, which I always was, Because we indians were ALWAYS shot, stabbed and killed by the cowboys over and over again. The cowboys and cowgirls dressed in boots and full leather and had shotguns and pistols. We indians wore nothing but skimpy little loincloths and had tomahawks that were no match against cowboy firepower. My neighbour Jessie was a real tomboy who always played the cowboy and she'd regularly rip off my loincloth before she riddled my exposed bare flesh with bullets and shot me dead. She also liked to stab me in the naked belly and pummel me. and on |
| 2004-11-17 12:24:16 | Phoenix Pt 4 Ch 01 | Dear dead indian - Yum! That sounds like lots of fun! You should write a story where the two of you meet as adults and play that game again... |
| 2005-02-11 10:45:26 | Phoenix Pt 4 Ch 01 | I loved the bullet in Beth's belly button! |
| 2004-08-09 02:53:40 | What should have been, episode #4 | Bravo, a tour de force. More! |