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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-01-27 16:32:18 | Life as a 13 yr. old | Honestly, with a bit of development, this story could be very good. This reads like a bare bones outline of what you want to say. Since you've posted the story and have had some time away from it, perhaps you should go back through and put in more details. Instead of the "grocery list" read, give me smells, tastes, touch, the textiles.... I want to know what that pillow felt like against your cock. Tell me what the emotion felt like when you figured out that it was cum and you hadn't just pissed in your bed. When you get it done, let me know. I'm interested in seeing the final result. |
| 2005-01-27 18:42:46 | Life as a 13 yr. old | this story was so fuckin stupid |
| 2005-01-29 19:38:23 | Life as a 13 yr. old | this story was so fucking retarded dude ur gay u can even get action in high school!!! WoW!!!! ur a big time loser |
| 2005-01-30 16:13:56 | Life as a 13 yr. old | that sucked |
| 2005-02-01 23:36:10 | Life as a 13 yr. old | Who humps pillows theese days? You Fuckin Suck Ass Man, Why Did You Bother Writeing It?...You Better Not Write Anymore On Here Cuz You Really Fuckin Suck |