| 2005-02-07 21:45:01 |
Life as a 13 yr. old
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so sad and boring |
| 2005-02-13 00:36:36 |
Life as a 13 yr. old
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Dude, finish puberty then start writing again...shitty |
| 2005-02-16 16:52:05 |
Life as a 13 yr. old
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well i will give it to you... you must be 14 or something ( i am 14 as well ) i have thought about writing sex stories but i dont think i would be any good. umm like darkgoddess said, you have a good outline for a story. now actually make action and yes most people in highschool do get action. my school is like a slut fest i mean it is rediculus. keep it up you will get the hang of it. but make the stories longer and more detailed also dont include urself as the main character. ( even if you are trying to tell a life story ) When you write more detials you can do something like this for a sex scene " gasping for breath as he jammed his erected rod into her warm oozing pussy he shot his cum into her with the most powerful orgasm he ever had." the 2 laid there together until they drifted t |
| 2005-02-16 20:36:24 |
Life as a 13 yr. old
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it was good but could use work |
| 2005-02-17 13:38:36 |
Life as a 13 yr. old
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Dude, Stick to reading not writing. |