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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2004-09-25 01:00:16 | The slender woman | A good story but I am not comfortable when reading stories in the present tense. It bhappened. Its not happening now. Change the tense and I'd rate it higher. |
2004-11-26 08:42:10 | The slender woman | Very romantic, a good story. Keep writing in present tense, I like your style. |
2005-01-06 23:24:51 | The slender woman | not bad, but not in the tense it was written in. it becomes boring and almost tedious with the repitition of he and she and he and she and he and she. got the point? but, a good imagination and if put into the proper perspective....... probably excellent |
2004-10-09 10:05:16 | My obsession with Ass's | im numbah 1 finally |
2004-10-10 01:41:24 | My obsession with Ass's | Nice story. Can't wait for the seconed. |