| 2005-05-28 16:15:23 |
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I usually like these sort of stories, but you just went over the edge. Little too much 5/10 |
| 2005-05-29 18:47:44 |
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Damn, I wish she had been awake and screaming, crying, begging, pleading.....but over all, good story. |
| 2005-06-14 08:53:30 |
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Now what kind of person even thinks about that sort of thing, huh?...some people are just plain WIERD.....such acts are disgraceful and dishonorable...not to mention morally disusting. I actually wonder if the girl had any internal damage givin all the stuff that she got. |
| 2005-06-18 02:09:22 |
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For all those in disgust...you were forewarned..if it offends you so deeply, then why force yourself to suffer through reading such morbid material...why?...because deep inside you crave it, but fear it...critisize not the mind who thought it...but the mind who craves it...luscious story...I'm slick with desire for your mind !! |
| 2005-08-05 03:04:50 |
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for the record it says right in his screen name its gonna be a morbid story...it kind of creeps me out but i got off to this...i feel kind of worried. oh well, a woman like her ... a tease ... she got her just desserts. somethin similar happened to one of my friends...she was the biggest fucking tease ive ever met and she ended up getting raped...go figure huh? well considering i have a kind of twisted sense of humor id say this is an 8/10 nice work dude. oh and hunter...morally disgusting? dont you mean somethin a little more tactfull like...morally bankrupt and disturbingly dark? ooohhh i actually loved it man ... fuck my critical rating...im givin it a 10...muhahahaha i love that shit, devil thats funny but my pseudo name would have been LUCIFER |