| 2005-04-26 04:47:47 |
Vietnam
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Wow, man. Awesome story. I give it a 10 out of 10. Yeah, there were grammatical and spelling errors but the plot and theme of the story own. Come out with part 2 quick, fast and in a hurry! Heh heh. =) |
| 2005-04-29 07:26:27 |
Vietnam
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wow. so how many STDs does he have now? |
| 2005-04-30 12:36:31 |
Vietnam
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good plot but spelling is wicked! yu sped up at the end but otherwise good story |
| 2005-05-11 17:03:48 |
Vietnam
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iwas in viet nam for two years, do not try writing about something you know anything about asshole. |
| 2005-07-29 15:04:30 |
Vietnam
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I did 4 TOD's in nam and never had a female LT in charge of us. All the female officers were medical or other. |