| 2005-05-04 21:00:52 |
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awesoem...man that was really good, keep up the good work dude, this story rules XXXXXXXX |
| 2005-05-09 18:33:36 |
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Thanks for making me cum |
| 2005-05-20 05:19:18 |
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thaT WAS something you sholud ask yourself where in your head it came from. it was the sort of thing you look at and wonder its worth. as awritter look at it , its not arousing and you dont use the sex to show anyhting about the charcter besides her willingnes for abuseso relly what works about it besisdes a gross out piece?if your going for gross out alone then yeah absolutetly it works but otherwise work on creating more detailed charcters unlike your 1d rapists or more arousing sex |
| 2005-05-23 06:57:57 |
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Great story! I just hope she got pregnant and they do it to her again and throw in some scat and beastiality. |
| 2005-06-03 18:05:05 |
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Wow i wish some guys would do that to me that sounds like so much fun the story got me soaked |