| 2005-06-08 02:12:15 |
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that shit was fucked up |
| 2005-06-23 09:41:59 |
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Your story was horrible. It lacked any artistic talent. The young girl was also unrealistic in the fact that "witches" do not practice magic like that. If you're going to write a story like that I suggest knowing what the fuck you're talking about. |
| 2005-06-27 20:59:29 |
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um ew |
| 2005-07-01 03:24:22 |
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ok good detail and stuff but i could never do something like to a girl and this story actualy made my hard on go away and i would have killed every 1 of them if i ever saw something like that.if i even herd some 1 talking like that i would have to fucking nock them out.later but you tell a the story good even though i didnt like what it was about. |
| 2005-07-05 15:36:38 |
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Don't pay any attention to those who knock your story. I personally have read it over many times and have enjoyed it immensely. I do agree with the comment that some fisting would have been nice, but the femur was just as awesome. I look forward to more of you work. |