| 2004-10-01 16:03:11 |
My cousin Joanne and my sister Ann
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not bad but you need alot of work spelling and gramitic work but over all not bad |
| 2004-10-16 08:40:48 |
My cousin Joanne and my sister Ann
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love the cheesy lines |
| 2005-03-19 12:56:45 |
My cousin Joanne and my sister Ann
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Thats bad |
| 2005-04-06 00:02:47 |
My cousin Joanne and my sister Ann
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damn...too short,you cut out during the middle of the action and you also need to use proper grammar and spelling |
| 2005-04-08 14:42:32 |
My cousin Joanne and my sister Ann
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GOOD story but ENGLISH was BAD. no problem i felt i was reading chinese story anyway what happened to you after that dear? |