| 2005-05-15 22:29:12 |
My cousin Joanne and my sister Ann
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what the hell ...one paragraph of sex ...that sux dude.....1/10.. sorry ...oh and ya ur grammer suxxx |
| 2005-05-20 11:27:11 |
My cousin Joanne and my sister Ann
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Sorry dude. You had a good story but you fucked it up with bad grammer and spelling. |
| 2005-05-28 21:12:27 |
My cousin Joanne and my sister Ann
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i loved it but it wasnt long enuff please make number two but dont let them fuck there mom to cliche |
| 2005-09-26 22:22:11 |
My cousin Joanne and my sister Ann
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could be more detail. but good all the same |
| 2005-11-26 18:01:24 |
My cousin Joanne and my sister Ann
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beginning of the story wsa good end terrible grammar prolbems 1/10 for efort |