| 2004-09-21 20:07:19 |
Halloween Party - Part 2
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yum, this will kepp me in wank material for ages |
| 2004-09-25 23:26:41 |
Halloween Party - Part 2
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Amazing! 10 out of 10! |
| 2004-09-26 00:16:32 |
Halloween Party - Part 2
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Damn good story, make a 3rd part! |
| 2004-09-27 00:43:11 |
Halloween Party - Part 2
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As I've said before, you're a good writer. But this one didn't live up to the other one's you've written. You didn't use the character feelings as much and the ending seemed rushed. And before everyone jumps on my back, this is just constructive criticism, I still think the story was good. |
| 2004-09-20 14:16:31 |
First time with my sister Kate
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all i can say is awesome you lucky fuck '''More ''''More |