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2004-09-21 02:47:47 First time with my sister Kate i got a good lokin sis but WHOW!!!
your sis is F*****g awsome
your lucky bastard
2004-09-21 10:01:11 First time with my sister Kate Wtf is this shit, go and learn how to write.
2004-09-21 23:36:56 First time with my sister Kate You suck. I wish I had a hot older sister.

Great story. You say you still have "special times"? let's hear em!
2004-09-22 20:27:47 First time with my sister Kate cummmmmmmmmm
2004-09-23 06:49:14 First time with my sister Kate 6/10.
"Should of fucked" writes one respondent. That should be "have" not "of"
The writing is too event oriented. Time can be taken to make your characters more real. Some of the Lesbian writing in Nifty will cover that better than I can explain it.
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