| 2008-04-13 09:18:11 |
Wedding Night_(3)
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This story sucks |
| 2004-09-28 20:03:33 |
Me and my sis
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=/ that sucked needs more detal needs more sex needs more of your sister im gonna fuker her now shes in my room w8ing |
| 2004-09-29 06:22:54 |
Me and my sis
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hey you need to work on your story line a litle bit more it wasnt completely shitty but it wasnt the best either. so just as =/ said you need a bit more details and a little more of a sex scene or more leading into the story not really just undoing her robe and basically fucking right then. so just work on it im sure you can do better. |
| 2004-10-03 20:45:10 |
Me and my sis
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off to a pretty good start. I am going to take this and edit it a bit, because i feel so much more can happen. With your permission, i would be very happy to post my version on this website. Credited to you, of course, for the original idea. |
| 2004-10-04 17:41:57 |
Me and my sis
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it was good but i think u should add to it |