| 2005-01-05 15:46:46 |
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OMG, this story made me cum all over my hand several times. Ashley reminds me of the thirteen year old daughter of this single mom who used to rent an apartment from my folks. Alex had long brown hair, dark brown eyes and a sweet little hairless pussy that I saw one day when I was helping her mom move some furniture. Alex came out of their shower with a big green towel wrapped around her hair and nothing else on. She was just starting to get curves, but no titties yet. She also had a little sister with wavy hair to her shoulders named J.C. She liked me to dry hump her when we went sledding. I give this story a 10/10. |
| 2005-01-08 12:18:42 |
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i liked it alot |
| 2005-01-09 16:25:25 |
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The only story ive commented, It s a very well writen stroy, except for one small detail. The guy went ffrom being completely against the sex to btrutally controlling. Somewhat non-believalbe. thats my only problem. it was, in fact, very amazing. Do keep writing, though. |
| 2005-01-10 17:27:00 |
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damn dude! That was an incredibly vivid story. One thing though, I don't understand how the guy(Jay) went from being extremely reluctant to bordering on sado. Other than that minor detail, I give this story a 10/10. When can we see the next part? |
| 2005-01-15 09:04:06 |
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awesome story! I would have liked to be ashley |