| 2005-02-10 02:39:42 |
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there alittle yung but othere than that it was good |
| 2005-02-11 06:33:13 |
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where is part two
10,11 and 12yrs old's
what could be better
can hardly wait till part two comes out |
| 2005-02-11 14:13:32 |
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Overall good story, a little too fast paced, need more character development, a little more believable, make the girls less suggestive, limit there no-hows and maturaty, keep it up! |
| 2005-02-14 10:06:38 |
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decent story, however, keep the names straight. Jessica became Jennifer and I think there should be more detail. Don't rush through it. |
| 2005-02-15 11:18:27 |
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Squirted! |